شعر بالإنجيزي؟؟

[بنوتة كويتية]

أولا أنا ماني فطحل بالإنجليزي بس طرت على بالي هكلمات وحبيت أكتبها وأبي رايكم فيها بصراحة، إهي حدها بسيطة لأن هذي أول مرة أكتب شي بالإنجليزي ( وشكلها بتكون الأخيرة)
by the way 4give my spelling mistake :)

"I always get what I want"
That's what u always say
"I respect ur feeling but u don't"
That's my saying & u'll hear it oneday
I loved u & that was my only falt
؟since what 4 it I have 2 pay
؟and since what I'm the one that always obay


once u realize ur mistake
and aske me 2 become a lover again
I must watch each step I'll take
otherwise I will sink in tear's rain
so tell me why should I remake
my life disaster again & again
?when ur love gives me nothing except the pain

إذا الموضوع محتاج ترجمة عطوني خبر :)

[زهرة البنفسج]

[align=center]NiCe TrY

WeLl dOnE

I LIKE UR WORDS
AN' I DID understand it

God Bless Ya

Best WiShEs[/align]

[بنوتة كويتية]

اقتباس   المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة زهرة البنفسج [align=center]NiCe TrY WeLl dOnE I LIKE UR WORDS AN' I DID understand it God Bless Ya Best WiShEs[/align]

thanx sweety 4 ur prety words

my pleasure :)

keep in touch

[واحد كووول]

[align=center]بنوتة كويتية ,hi

Well its not so bad since its you're first poem

you just need to work more on the grammar and spelling, and i'm sure that you'll write really great poems

a good start! so dont stop writing[/align]

[الشجاع]

مثل ماقلت اختى زهرة
k7
NiCe TrY

WeLl dOnE

I LIKE UR WORDS
AN' I DID understand it

God Bless Ya

Best WiShEs

اموون عليها ونقلت ردهاkK،4

صح السانك الا شلون في الانجليزيk14

اخوك الشجاع

[Handsome]

بنوتة كويتية

It is a fantastic try

just go ahead and keep writing... but don't forget to read a lot

[AL-BADER]

[glow=FFFFFF][align=left]It is a nice poem and has potentials and because
it is you're first don't hasitate to write again and again
you can support you're self by theis way
and you remind me about my first poem wich iam about to publish right now
you and the othres will read it shortly.......





Senserly:>>>>>AL-BADER[/align][/glow]

[Handsome]

Hello Mr.AL-BADER

You've got a nice language.. but please, watch out your spelling..

I am so sorry for that.